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Wow love the way you have put harry in charge of lucius and cant wait for the next update hopefully that will be soon, loving it I cant wait for them to become lovers they are hot.

Your story is very well developed

he's filthy fucking rich!!!! i want to be rich oh my god!!!!! i love this when do they have sex!!!!!!!

Please write more! I wasn't so unhappy with this chapter, it gave the necessary explainations for the story to continue, I suppose.
It really starts to get interesting! Ministry loan = good blackmail stuff and/or access to important informations (the heir to the founders
can undetected enter and get to the archives and auror reports). About going back to school: going back to Hogwarts as an secure place
(best shielded according to canon) and starting training and learning with Lucius (and Draco??). What ever you think is best, I'm looking
forward to more chapters in the near future - hopefully!

this very good story keep going and post soon
bye bye

Hi, do you have a Beta? I think you could use one, no offence meant. There are several things I noticed. First, while the Daily Profit would be an appropriate name for that newpaper, I think its really called Daily Prophet. Also, there were some minor grammar mistakes.
Lucius never answered Harrys question how he should call him. Also, should he call him Harry in public? I think Master or at least Mr. Potter would be more appropriate.
I think their relationship is developing very quick. They were enemies, and suddenly they both want to be 'more than friends'? Sure, they both thought about that before, but neither of them knows that. I think its to early for such a statement. It would be better placed later in the story. They agreed to work together, after all. More than enough opportunity to develope things.
Now that I'm done nit-picking, I want to say I like your story very much. I'm a big Lucius/Harry fan, and I hope you keep on writing and update often.
About your questions, I think Harry should at least return to Hogwarts for a short visit. The princes book is still there and who knows what else is hidden in that hiding room?

Oh, and I think what Harry should do with that loan depends on how he decides on the question in the prologue, if he wants to take Voldemort on on his own or with the help of the ministry. By working on his public image I think he is already leaning towards the second option. He could hold the loan back as a trumph card if he plans to reform the ministry after defeating Voldemort, but either should be interesting to discuss with Lucius. I think Lucius would use it for blackmail. Reforming the ministry publicicly whould alert Voldemort of Harrys sheming, after all, and Lucius is a Slytherin. He would attack from behind.

Wow, awesome fic... Loved it, I hope you keep writing it. The "bank" surprise really added something to an already good plot. I hope there's still many chapters to come...

I love your story. You are doing a great job so far, however there is one mistake that is occurring throughout your story. I don't mean to sound rude, but your consistent misspelling of Albus Dumbledore's last name is a little annoying. Other than that you are doing a great job. I have found myself returning multiple times during the day to see if you have updated the story. Please continue on with the good work. I commend you, I couldn't have written such a fine story myself. I shall leave that up to you.

Great story. I am thoroughly enjoying this one. I love the interaction between the characters. Please update again soon.