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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!!! I really do hope you keep going with it!!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story seems very promising. I hope you update soon.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great start please please more soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
angel
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY update soon.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for the first chap...I hope to see more very soon please!!!!!!!!
~ If fighting for you is the only way to keep you in my arms....I'll face the gates of hell just to prove it.~
~ If fighting for you is the only way to keep you in my arms....I'll face the gates of hell just to prove it.~
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok loose the first person, make the next chapter and all chapters after third person.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start! Can't wait to read more, keep up the great work!