rate_review Reviews

This story is awesome and I already love it. I hope you update soon because I really want to read more.

Excellent! This is a superb story; I love the concept. It's an entirely new twist - or perhaps a dozen new twists - to an older idea. I love the story line thus far, and there is a great deal of potential in this story to become one of the 'Greats' of Fanfiction. There are some grammatical and spelling errors; however, they are few enough that they do not detract from the story itself. You could possibly include more description of the physical environment and the reaction the characters have to the objects, people, and events that occur around them, but again, it doesn't detract from the quality of the work. You've done an excellent job with this!! I sincerely look forward to seeing more of this fanfiction.

Also, should you seek a Beta reader to help with spelling and grammar errors, feel free to E-mail me. I'd be more than happy to help! If you do decide to do so, please state in the subject that you want me to be a beta reader, otherwise I may delete it on accident.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter,
Deathscythe

Ah! Apparently it hides my email; anyways, it's icetastesnice@yahoo.com, in case you decide to E-mail me. ^-^ Sorry about that! I've never reviewed on AFF.net before this, and I didn't know it would hide my email.

Oh...I like this...is Sable going to stay himself....or are they going to realize he's Harry? Does he have the scar still? Anyway, I guess I'll have to wait and see but I am excited about it. Keep up the good work.

love it
update as soon as possible

XD update! i know i sound sick, but i like this! btw, sable is a nice name!

great chapter update soon