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good two chapters. A few grammatical problems, but nothing really major. Please update soon.

More chapters!!! UPDATE soon please.

i wasn't sure but now i am -- I LIKE THIS TALE. Please, keep going. :)

Please, no happy family reunion for a long time, no

James and Lily have a lot to answer for, Harry should take a while before forgiving them . The relationship between Severus, Sirius & Remus will be the true test of friendship and family to see Harry through the latest turmoil in his life and will show James that things cant stay the same forever.

Excellent job, I cant wait for the next chapter

Hmm, your writing seems very formal, I have had the same trouble in the past but it is truly hard to fix. Reading it out loud to yourself might help you understand what I am saying about the style.

I like the story so far, though I truly do not believe James and Lily should be forgiven until a MUCH later date.

I like this fic. It is one of the better James/Lilly return fics. I hope you don't have them forgiven anytime soon. Also hope that the weasleys let the Potters have it. In a way it was child abandomment and fraud. Also hope they don't get hold of the Potter estate. In legal sense James and Lilly renounced and forsaked their birthrights and anme and since Harry was the legal heir and the Potters are "legally dead" and it have been over ten years. Harry can be the sole heir and James and Lily and their brood get nothing. That would teach them. If you want to use that bunny it is all your. Update soon and looking forward to more.

I say a slow process. Please keep writing. I'd like to see the reaction on James' fave when he finds out Harry is married to Sev. :)

make it slow progress please
they have to suffer
good story by the way

slow process