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I love the story. please update soon. please.

I thought it was sweet how Harry is getting along better with his siblings. Hope you keep at it.

I say have Snapes Siblings be nice and I also think that maybe you should have his parents be dead instead and consentrate on the siblings trying to get passed what happened through the years of sev being disowned and the two wizarding wars

Hey its me again I think Harry should not forgive his parents but tolerate them and also try to get along with one of his siblings as for the baby I say twins a boy and a girl and their names should be Ashling for the girl and Caspian for the boy
one question is Ron and Mione going to be in the story because I think it would be neat to have them come back and try to earn Harry's forgiveness

I really like your story. Awesome Job!!! How about have either Sev have a twin or the brother and the sister twins? (and gets along with them or his twin). But anyaway, it would be nice if he got along with his brother and one sister, but the youngest is stuck up because she is favored by her parents. As for Harrys baby, it doesn't matter much, both are cute.

Twins...one of each. No, Sev's siblings and their children should be on the outs with him. I could see the Potter children and Snape children trying to make Sev's and Harry's life miserable. No harming the baby, though. i still don't want the Potters getting any of the money. I think that James is in abandoment of his birthright. It should be Harry's. Was it my imagination or did you really write the Potters not really caring about his life at the Durselys. It seemed like they did not even care about what happened or what they have been told. They act like it is no big deal that he was beaten, starved, or raped and that doesn't include Voldy. Also what is the REALK reason they suddenly showed back up Please update soon

Go Sirius! Damn, I love the idea of Sirius turning on James because James bailed out and left everyone else to deal with the fall out. In general I don't like the character of Sirius, immature bullies have never appealled to me, but I just might make an exception for YOUR Sirius.

I think they should have a boy. Most of the stories have them with a baby girl. I think Sev's siblings would be intelligent enough to know that Sev was on the Light side and helped win the war.

good chapter, Sev to get along with his siblings, and the baby, a girl named Hannah, bye

This is very interesting. As far as Harry forgiving James & Lily I think he should just treat them as someone he is not friends with and just have to put up with them since they "work" together. As for the three kids well he shouldn't take the sins of the parents out on them. Harry should explain that he would be nice because he works with them and that is all... they are not related, not friends they are nothing... is there a way for Harry to disown them legally/magically? Maybe do that but then that would disown him from the kids as well. I know that sounds cruel but did they even try to find out after they saw the picture of Harry. Did they not see anything about Sirius being in prison? As for the baby I don't care what it is as long as it is ok. I am glad that Harry does have a family and that they are all there for him. Keep writing update soon