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for The Return

by LeoZodiac

person joey
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah and I think both Sirius and Remus should get a chance at James & Lily (maybe not hit them) gave them a real hard talking to.... what the heck happened to that Gryffindor courage? They ran and left Harry and then didn't come back. How old is Cody is he about the right age that Lily would have been pregnant about the time the dark lord came to kill "them" and Harry? Is that why they didn't come back? They ran and left everyone.... Sirius, Remus, the order they could have been a real help in the war. They didn't show their Gryffindor courage very well.
person alix
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story!!! Wow James & Lily really showed their Gryphindor courage... hahahaha!!! They left.... everyone.... weren't they part of the Order? They could have helped during the first war. I mean after they heard Harry was dead why didn't they come back.... guess they were afraid. But that Minister of Magic told them Harry was dead... whats up with that was that guy evil or something? Glad to see Harry get along with one of his brothers... it figures it would be the one sored into slytherin considering Harry was almost sorted into Slytherin himself. I guess the 'hatred of the parents' is passed onto the children in the case of the tow older boys since they don't like Slytherin and only James (and maybe Lily) are the only ones that could influence the boys into not liking Slytherin house. Someone needs to really talk to those 2 and explain that the dark wizards didn't only come from Slytherin. I also think Sirius should get another chance and decking James. I don't think Harry should forgive them or if he does he should explain that he forgives them for he would never consider them his parents and probably not even friends. I can see why he wouldn't want to hold hatred in his heart that isn't good. but I don't think I would let them have a relationship with my kids. Also what about the Potter estate I don't think Harry should have to give anything back. They left and changed their names, etc they should have to make do with whatever they have now or earned or whatever they were able to take with them. Mabye Bill or Charlie (whichever works with the goblins) could do something about that.
person JJ
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea, more story!!!!
person Nicole
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I'm glad Sev has some family now. And I'm glad Harry is close to his youngest brother.
person anonymous
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad they all got along in the end. PLease update soon good chapter
person kiara
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i would like a boy and upfate soon please
person momoko
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it should be a bo, i dont really like when they have a girl
person Mandy
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the rest ^_^
person litekreem
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and hopefully its a girl.Maybe Harry will give the Potter's back thier vault key I mean I wouldnt want thier money and I'm sure thier other kids would love to have it