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by LeoZodiac

person LazySnake
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh...what domestic bliss.
^_^
person Ari
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work
person JJ
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Appease everyone???? What about Harry who has to carry two babies???? He will be big as a house! So Snape will forgive his parents, but not forget them. Sounds like Harry. Of course, Harry is an extreme case. More???
person anonymous
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! An update. great chapter. I love how Severus is so protective of Harry. Please update soon
person PJ
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another cool update. I am glad Sev was able to clear things up with his family. I see Harry told his "parents" how he felt that is good. I am glad he is willing to try a friendship but I can see why he wouldn't see them as his parents. It was just too long I suppose and they did leave him even if they thought he was dead (I hope you will explain why they were told he was dead by that ministry guy later in the story) for like 14yrs they could have come back then but didn't. I also don't understand why they didn't know about Sirius I mean he was wanted by both wizards & muggles... it was all over the "news" it looks like they would have seen something. Anyway nice update keep writing!!!
person momoko
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, I like it, bye
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is brilliant. i vote a little girl cos a whole family of males would get a tad tedious. i have three names that i like; Meriel, Sienna and Adrienne. althou7gh if its twins than a boy and a girl would be nice. possibly Raven for a boy that or River (i know i have wierd choices in names). you don't have to use my ideas they are just that, a adoring fans suggestions. anyway please u[pdate this wonderful fic.
person sassygirl
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon...am dying to find out what happens next
person absinth
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, an update. update more please, oh, and as there seem to be twins in the snape family, then i thing twins, one of each, would definitely suit our beloved pair
person joey
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a great story. It is kind fo funny that all four of the Potter boys got sorted into different houses. But I remember that Harry almost got sorted into Slytherin too. So maybe the family has more Slytherin traits then James & Lily like to admit.... they did create those golems and then go and hide. They "tricked" people just like a Slytherin would. And the way James called the Weasleys Slytherins points to him that created the "hate" in his kids for that house. I know they said Peter turned them into the Dark Lord.... but maybe somebody needs to actually tell them straight out that Gryffindor <-thats how it is spelled-- house is not as "squeaky clean" as they think it is. glad Harry and Mitch are getting along he is young enough that he can form his own opinions before the influence of James' (and mayb Lily's) hatred takes root too much. The older ones have been exposed to it longer. Maybe Harry should tell Mitch about the hat wanting to put him in Slytherin but since he had met some people he didn't like and ther were put into Slytherin he convinced the hat to put him in Gryffindor. Anyway update soon