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for War for Peace

by Kaspjo

schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so awesome and i loved it!!!!:)
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 8! Who is Joshua? Where is the guy from the future? Must have more!
person blakie
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
......nice, very nice....
person Amessis
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved this again! Poor Draco.
person Snarky Bitch
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is written so its not very easy to follow. The pace is too fast and it skips around too much.
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 6! Don't want Harry to die! *sigh* What happens next? Need more!
person Atlanta
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As an English major it horrifies me to see your severe lack of basic grammar. When new people speak you start a new paragraph. Soon as I saw that mistake I stopped reading. Please, if you call yourself a writer have the self respect to learn some basic grammar and get yourself a beta. Good luck with the rest of your writing.
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 5! Draco's a were? Interesting.
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! What is Joshua? Can't wait for chapter 2!
person dyanna
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story! can't wait for chapter 2.