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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is good although you really could add to it. Also, you might want to do a search on the net for a free spell checker because the story needs help on the spelling and the grammer. Maybe if you you had a beta...
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor ron nobody cares haha hope theres another chappie in the works I sawthis story on ff.net I hope your the same person