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for Union of Three

by fazed

person Kagaya
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute.
person Tyrisha
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah, political manuevering..... always a pleasure. not. to think it only took the names of two elves to get the Fae Queen to switch sides. such is life. please continue
person Tyrisha
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor Severus, he just can't catch a break, can he? I almost feel bad for him. almost.
person jess
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry is amusing, and I like the first thing he said to Lucious when he returned.
person Chrysanthemum
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great fic, but there's a slight problem. When speaking of elves, you don't use the term elfin, I know that word says it's correct, but it actually an incorrect creation of the Keebler elves. Really is is supposed to be elven. I thought that would be quite useful to you. Now I need to go to sleep and I'll continue reading this tomorrow.
person PinkPenguinPrincess
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squee! You updated! Thanks so much! This made my day!
person angel
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great please please more ...in till next time later for now

angel
person Newtype
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dogy that was good, Snape to a T! More please!
person momoko
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, bye
person Tamura
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
harry's a right imp, isn't he? 'up for seconds' yeah, and he's the one carrying the baby. this story just never stops throwing monkey wrenches into the mix.... keep up the good work