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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great story please please more more i would love to read more ...please update soon ..later for now
angel
angel
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, talk about an explosive start! I can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon.
schedule
November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, this looks like loads of drama to come.
schedule
November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I like it. Can't wait to read more.
schedule
November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah... great beginning,
Can't wait for more
Chow for now!
Can't wait for more
Chow for now!
schedule
November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good beginning... update soon
schedule
November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story
i love it
i love it
schedule
November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where in the bloody hell is the rest of the story? I want it now!!!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start, and I love the concept you've centered your plots around. Hey, if it works, why change, right? ~lol~ I'm off to review your other stories.
schedule
November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another new story. Looks really interesting. Can't wait for more.