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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you've really got to update, great chapter. That was a cute twist, Severus and Remus, hahaha, wonder if anything will eventually develop. Harry is a cute little kitten tho. Sorry had to say that. but keep up the writing need more.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know sometimes Ron can be so over dramatic. Anyway, thanks for the update. I was dying of boredom over the weekend. ~sniffles~ None of my favorite authors were updating. Luckily that's been rectified. ~hugs computer screen~ Well, I can't wait for the next chapter. Bye.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, you are not allowed to write fics this good! I started reading but couldnt stop until I'd read it all.
how am I to stop, when it's this good?
looking forward to the next sinfully good chapter. :-)
how am I to stop, when it's this good?
looking forward to the next sinfully good chapter. :-)
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, amazing!!! Please update soon. :)
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooooow...had a Star Wars moment when you said Voldemort was Harrys father....its so like *in Darth Vader voice* I am your faaaaaaaaaather...* insert deep ratteling chain-smoker type breathing*
A tad cliche perhaps???
And couldn't you have just stuck to giving Harry one super magical being type heritage? Sorry, its a bit much. And a bit unoriginal. On the bright side at least you didn't ALSO give him a veela heritage...we all know Harry is overly wonderful and can jump buldings in a single bound as well as all sorts of other interesting stuff but hows about you give him something to develope later in the story ???
Sorry for the critisism. But hey if I didn't think yer story had potential I wouldn't be reviewing...
A tad cliche perhaps???
And couldn't you have just stuck to giving Harry one super magical being type heritage? Sorry, its a bit much. And a bit unoriginal. On the bright side at least you didn't ALSO give him a veela heritage...we all know Harry is overly wonderful and can jump buldings in a single bound as well as all sorts of other interesting stuff but hows about you give him something to develope later in the story ???
Sorry for the critisism. But hey if I didn't think yer story had potential I wouldn't be reviewing...
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
P.S. that review is based solely on the first chapter. So dount have a go at me yet. There may soon be some praise forth coming...
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, that was funny! Rons such an idiot. How can you just tell a huge secret like that in front of supposed death-eaters??!Duh! Somebody should put him on a leash before he does more damage.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Just found it through someone else's recommendation. I can't wait to read more. Draco/ Lucius and Harry all accepted the bond quickly. But then again, how can you keep three such sexy men seperate for long?????? And I love Snape's snarkiness. More soon!!!!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Lucius is really growing on me, and I swear, this is now my favorite threesome. Your story is just hot as hell, and I can't wait for more.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noo is not the time