rate_review Reviews

Sorry about the previous review. The grammar was just butchered..*blushes*...I do have a basic grasp of such things as the English language; just not at certain times. For example, when I am more concerned with ousting the idea out of my head and into words. I just felt the need to explain that.

And just to reinterate my previous reviews point...excellent job! :0)

not sure why there are no reviews yet...but excellent story...I also wish you would finish the \"Rape of Bulma\"....

I honestly liked this story, but thought that there might be just be a little too much \"Mary Sue\" to make it palatable to many readers. Foe future reference, please omit mentioning absent husbands, present stepchildren, etc. Readers of erotica like to imagine their heroines unencumbered. They want an escape from the everday life...not a reminder.