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*Grins* loved the reactions when they saw the movie. Can't wait to see what "punishment" Severus has in store! Look forward to another update! Well done

Excellent chapter! Loved the explaination that was given to those three and that Harry comes around. I look forward to the next chapter. Well done!!!!

Can you review a story you're helping to write? lol Well, I'll just say that Ami's parts are hot...er...make me hot...um, yeah. ;)

Oh my God, this story is sooo good @_@ I am in awe at the amount of smut you have managed to squeeze into it, and yet still maintain some sembalance of a plot. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the story progresses now that the trio is in the mix. Please update soon guys!

Hey Ami! I didn't want to leave a review until I finished reading this story and it is really excellent and very HOT! You and Rebecca have done an outstanding job! Loved how you protrayed Severus, I just about wanted to slap Harry and the other two for barging in like that. lol Severus should as those three how they found him, that is one question that popped into my mind for sure. Update soon guys and keep up the great work I applaud you both!

Wow! The illustration really conveys the movement and tension of the moment. Lucius looks a lot sexier than Severus - but then, I think he does in the films too. Nevertheless, it's still Sev that I love - he has hidden depths.

One of the best stroy I read!!!!
I want MORE MORE MORE MORE!

Wow! That was so filthy and sexy. It must be amazing for you to read the porn you've written and see your own name in it. The mind-link thing was incredible. Severus obviously intends to uncover every single inhibition in Ami and Becca and force them to verbalise them and then (gulp) experience them.

Let's hope it isn't possible to "use up" one's sex drive by trying everything so that there's nothing new left to see you through the rest of your sex lives. Cos if that is possible, then I'm sure your Severus could do it.

An excellent story. And I'm amazed to think that Ami and Becca really exist! How brave and confident you two are to actually appear as characters in an explicitely sexy story. I don't think you are Mary Sues. I can't help wondering about your real sex lives. After all, there are no Snapes in real life (are there?).

I have to admitt that I am not a big M/F/F fan, but I am enjoying the interesting experience of reading this story. You have decent character development and some plot, especially at the end of chapter thirteen. I am wondering if this is something that will turn into a deeper plot or is this something meant to be an amazing experience for all of them. I would like to see a deeper plot, but that is just me, and that isn\'t saying that what you have thus far written is in anyway inferior. I think you are a talented writer and have a firm grasp in this story, and hope that you continue to write.