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by Marvinroom

person Cappuccino
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love the way Draco is so sweet and calm. It's great seeing Harry, Draco and Ron get along for once. I absolutely adore that he wishes to court her rather than demand and possess. It's so sweet!
person Stacy
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!
I can't wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ME like Me like Me like!!!! Update soon
person Sexy Relly
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon cant wait
person moxie
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please!
person Cappuccino
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I like the countdown thing. Keep it up.
person intcrimgrrl
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting take on the whole veela thing - instead of massive fighting, they\'re approaching it maturely. Spelling needs serious work, however, especially chapter 2.
person Stacy
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
i can\'t wait to read more.
person cruttan
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there Ivy!

There were many things Hermione could take in a day. She had developed in all the years with Harry a ridiculously high tolerance for pain but this just pushed her over. Draco could be and arrogant, self absorbed prat, that she could handle. She reveled in handle that Draco. But calm and logical Draco just shut down her brain.

LOL! This cracked me up. I also thought that Hermione\'s reaction to Draco\'s announcement was spot on- whatever it was she said about him not being able to tell her what to do with her body.

It\'s intriguing. Calm and logical Draco is refreshing, but I hope that we still get a bit of the snarky Draco that we know and love! :)

Will be looking for updates!
person choosetoremainanonymous
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you could go far with this...i understand time crunches, but longer chapters would be much better. i take it this is a veela fic...? there\'s nothing wrong with your writing and the storyline looks good, but not much has happened so far, so it\'s hard to tell what\'s going to happen. keep updating!