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Is this an Alternate reality story? because in the HP books Harry\'s relatives would never set foot close to the school Not to mention that if they are all muggles they wouldn\'t even be able to see the school due to the magic that hides it from non witch/wizard/magic folks. And what is this Draco tripping like some simpering girl in the second chapter? That only happens in the movies where the girl is so graceful until it is time to run away that then she trips and hurts herself. Also if they were in a secret passage how did Harry\'s aunt find him? This sounds like an interesting story but it doesn\'t flow very well and has some plot holes. Keep writing though I do look forward to reading more and maybe it will explain the things I was asking about.

I really enjoy the opening chapter, I would like to see how you build on it with Draco and Harry\'s relationship.

THIS IS NOT A REVIEW. JUST A NOTICE. Sorry about all the problems my computer is having, but I will be lucky to get half my stuff typed by the end of the day. But I shall not give up! I will get this stupid peice of junk to work yet!


Thank you for your attention for this breife spaz(?) out. Have a nice AFF day.

This sounds like an interesting story so far. Keep it up!

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I love it! Poor Harry! Please update soon1

Poor Harry! So now he\'s running? I can\'t wait for chapter 2!

It\'s a good start short but good please update A S P