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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters are a little short, you might wanna change that, other than that it\'s interesting
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is that going to be Hermione\'s true appearance? blond hair, blue eyes. What does he mean, he won\'t screw up? so hermione has being with him before? Good story, keep updating, can\'t wait for chapter 4.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What did u do to her?!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good so far. put another chapter up soon!!!!!!!!! puhhhhhhhhhhleeeeze *makes cute puppy dog eyes and sticks out bottom lip*
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story looks like its going to be really good and I\'ve enjoyed what I\'ve read so far. I\'m really interested to see what happens next. The only thing is, the chapters are really on the short side. I mean the first and second chapter combined are only a couple of paragraphs if that. I wouldn\'t mind a bit of a wait for longer more detailed chapters ^_^
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this has SO much potential, i really like your writting style and the build up for the plot. But the chapters are too short!! Cant wait for more!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a good start of a story, the chapters could/should be longer though... The chapters are so short that you barely have any time to get in to the story, before they are over. It could very well be a really good story, just have longer chapters...
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Manda, you know who I am, and I know where you live. Well babe, good story, even though I read it before it came to live here. Lemme know if you want help with anything. I\'m thinking of putting a story on here too. I say, like everyone else, that the chapters should be a little longer. And you know I\'m expecting some steamy love in here *wink*. Otherwise the story already rocks! Keep it comin!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LONGER CHAPTERS!!! (pretty please?)