rate_review Reviews

You have the makings of a really good fanfic. But the short
chapters make it disjointed. However, best of luck with the play.
Best wishes.

Teehee, Dragons and Kittens...Makes one feel gooey inside...

I love it!!! Oh my Goodness I like I have yet to read anything like!!!

I know that it has been said before, but you have got to make the chapters longer! I am really interested in the storyline, but collectively, though you have four chapters, it is not very much to go with. If you keep posting these one paragraph sort of chapters, your story will be like 60 pages long, and that is just annoying to have to keep uploading new pages like that.

TOO SLOW>> MOOVEEE ..
please give me a LONG chapter..

Good attempt at a first story. It is overly dramatic with not enough plot for me. I think what is going on - I\'ve done this myself - is that you read your story to yourself knowing all the richness and creativity that you mean to bring to the story. You don\'t see the lack of fullness to the story because to you, your imagination automatically fills in the gaps because you know the story so well. When you come back to this story in say, five years, you will know what I mean. Good job, countinue writing and I can see a lovely writer in the making. :-)

I really like this story adn it is progressing nicely if a little slowly, and it seems like you got the start of a good plot in your hands. Please continue

Yay for update! Boo, that its so short! Although, I understand the whole play thing, I used to do about four throughout the school year and I know how even one alone can eat up a schedule. So I suppose I can forgive you, lol. Even though short, I\'m loving the intereaction between Draco and Hermione. I know some would argue that Hermione is a strong character [and she is!] but it\'s nice to see her having to take comfort someone and well since Draco\'s the one willing to give it just makes it even better ^_^

I happily await more!

good job!

Squee, that was such a pleasure to read [though you\'re killing me with the short chapters here, lol] Anyway, I loved it and the last line just really hooked me. He won\'t let her escape again! I love Draco possessive affection, I really think that\'s how he\'d naturally be with someone, just because of how he was raised. I see truly loving Hermione but in what many would consider an unconventional way. Whoo, I know this is going to be one interesting read.

I cannot wait to see what you have happen next!