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for A Dragon and His Kitten

by SweetAsHoney

person way2hott4u
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i dont get it...
person whogirl
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You said you were going to update this fic with a really long chapter "next week" and that was TWO weeks ago. I'm getting impacient and your fic is already on the fourth page. Come on!!!
person pixi
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting. Pretty good really. Do be careful with the your/you\'re mix-ups remember your = possissive, you\'re = you are
person Mitalanea
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This sounds really promising....Looking forward to reading what is next so please continue!!!


~Mit
person The Doominator
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhh... it\'s ok!
person Chels
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Manda, like I said before, I will help you with the story as much as you want me too. Hehe, aristocratic british lilt. Well, I\'ll actually see you later today... loves ya!
person firewall
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL Yup I think you had better finish this chapter latter...you left a lot of us hanging wondering how the heck Fred Weasley felt comfortable just walking in.
person SlytherinPrincess
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!!! U can\'t do this!!!!! U must continue writing this. It sounds very interesting and Draco sounds sooooo sexy!!! I need 2 read da rest of it!
person Tygerlily
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My complaint is same as always - just too damn short, lol. I did notice a few errors along the way but nothing too serious. You might consider getting a beta reader or at least someone you can brainstorm with. That way it\'s another set of eyes going through your chapters before posting. Oh, and a note on the mac and cheese line: In my opinion, I just can\'t see Draco saying mac but more Macaroni. He is Lucius Malfoy\'s son now. ^_^

Anyway, though ridiculously short, it was still a pleasure to read and I can\'t wait to see what you have happen next!