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Very interesting, Constructive criticism--> I suggest that you go over your chapters before posting them, look for grammer and spelling mistakes, also be careful while writing don't make the story too quick paced or make it seem that you eagerly want to get to one part to the other. These factors can make the story slightly confusing or make the readers loose interest fast, i suggest that you expand on the details, explain how sexy harry looks, or how Draco's house was decorated, durring your sex scene you had the potential of making it quite hot with more detail to Harry and Draco's hot bodies.

Anyway keep up the good work and i can't wait for more updates.

luv it u should wright more

Hmm... Snape and the visitor walked in on them? =o) Update soon please!!!!!!

you are just pure evil! has anyone mentioned that? evil

Crazy chapter and oh no not a c;iffy

great update i always say end with a laugh

Hmm... I wonder who's at the door? Should be interesting. =o) Please update soon!

Ooh, I take it Draco gets to go for a ride?

Oh I need chapter 6!!! Who is at the door? Draco called him Harry! How did Draco get to see and what did he do afterwards? It obviously shocked Severus. More please!

Aaaw :D They will ride harry, right?? :D Aaaaaw. Please update soon!