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for Lost Shadows

by 2good4u

person angel
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now only what the elf came earlyer mione lavender and ginny would not be standing in the hall with five deatheater.... please more soon ... i would love to know that will happen to them now ...keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person angel
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~....poor snape ......man poor natalie... and blast you percy how could you ... and what did happne to lavender and the others.....please more i love it ... keep up the awesome work ..later for now

angel
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story this is a excellent responce for my challenge the chapters are kinda short but the story is great keep up the good work That thing with percy was a surprice good job keep going
person 2good4u
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I have had a couple people email me telling me to speed up, they want more lemon and such. But if you guys want more plot, that is something I would MUCH rather do. Thanks for all the reviews guys!
I will try and get another chapter up, longer (slower) and a bit more plot. Alright?
Love you all!
-Lynn Zabini
person angel
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man poor lavender.... what are they going to do now ... and when will harry get back ... and what of the order ... please more ...keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person Anon
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you write small chapters but update quickly.

a little more story to the chapters would be nice
person angel
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man please update soon this is a great story ... i cant wait to read more please update soon

angel
person dynamiteplay
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why aren\'t there more chapters?! I love it. So suspenseful and tense and mmm. Continue, please.