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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, but you have a few minor grammar and punctuation issues--a beta reader would help with that. I was really disturbed when Draco kept going even after the girl told him to stop--that\'s rape in my book. I especially liked the part where Hermione took off the robe and handed it back to Draco after the incident; that was a powerful way of showing how angry she was.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I like this story so far. It\'s really getting me interested in it as the story progresses. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. I hope you update again soon. keep up the great writing!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY AND THE WAY YOU WRITE ALL THE CHARACTERS AND HOW THE STORY FITS THE TITLE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my heart bled 4 hermione! why is draco being so evil 2 her?!?! :\'(((
but possessive draco is so freaking hooooot!
that last chapter was brilliant!
more more more :D
but possessive draco is so freaking hooooot!
that last chapter was brilliant!
more more more :D
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Draco\'s character, and Hermione has just enough of that oblivious quality we all love about her. Please update soon
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I love a mean Draco, so don\'t let him get too soft! Please update soon. Thank you.
lensa
lensa
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heey, i just read the story, it\'s good! please put more plot/happenings in each chapter so we\'re not hanging on with such anticipation without that much happneing hehe, and update sooner!
:-) thanks!
:-) thanks!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love it. I wonder what Hermione is going to do next. Update soon please.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea, and i will love to see what you do with it. Good job so far! Cant wait for more!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG....that was so sad...i almost started crying....you describe everything so well....i cant wait to read more...