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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that\'s an interesting story and I like it so much. Please write more! Oh tell me one thing is Blaise has anything for Hermione? ;)
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!! I love it!!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good going, Hermione! Make that blond possesive jerk shape up! *cheers her on*
Man, right now, I have to say...Draco does not deserve Hermione. *Smacks him* He\'s creepy, too...hurting his mate during sex! Sheez, why does she want him?
Well, the story is very entertaining so far! I can\'t wait for more!
Man, right now, I have to say...Draco does not deserve Hermione. *Smacks him* He\'s creepy, too...hurting his mate during sex! Sheez, why does she want him?
Well, the story is very entertaining so far! I can\'t wait for more!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more dagnabit!! You must write more. The story started off a bit slow but chapter 4 really moved things along! Can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
extreme fanon, but whatever floats your boat. The story\'s entertaining/creepy anyhow. The story will come out badly if he confesses his feelings and she suddenly decides to return them though. You either need an unhappy ending or lots of angst to make the story work.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it! i agree with mona and michelle only after he finds her playing with herself he should lick her fingers then before anything can happen the bimbo in the next room should call for him to see if everything is okay. Hermione then gets pissed off and kicks draco out and he goes back to his room with his current slut. She has had it and goes out and meets a guy brings him home gets it on with him and then the next morning draco comes into her room to say he is sorry about the girl last night he finds her and the guy from the night before asleep in bed naked only covered by a sheet. he rages yells grabes the guy theatens him gives him his clothes and tells him to get out. Hermione then gets up and yells at him while she gets dressed walks out of her room with him calling her a slut then she turns and says \"me a slut draco you must be going to other countries for women because you are running out of them in england!\" she turns back to find the other 3 roomies having breakfast staring at them in shock at the situation with the guy from the night before then draco and hermione. She says to them \"i\'ll be back for the rest of my stuff later i am moving out!\" - that would be so cool! oh please oh please use that stuff we would all love it! well update soon!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it more with each passing chapter. i love the part about the boys in 7th year that was great. i can so see hermione getting herself off because of her sexual tension and he hears her comes busting into the room rips off her covers and catches her in fear and anger of some guy in there with her. that would be so great lol update when u can!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh you could use that if u want lol (the above)
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I would feel the same way. Poor Hermione. Ginny should take Hermione out. Our the guys girlfriends. YOU KNOW. Give her a make up or something. But i dont think she needs it. lol. I hope you make this situation better for hermione. she deserves better than being treated as a mudblood slut. I can\'t believe draco said that and his the \"pureblood womenizer\" Pure...my bu** hermoine is more pure than him in any way. I\'m livid with the way draco treated hermione and how he brings girls, even if his sharing the apartment with other people. kind of disrepecting his roommates. I think hermions should go out with someone, draco, hates like hell. THAT WILL BE FUN. OR LET THE BOYS TAKE HR TO A CLUB OR SOMETHING. PLEASE MAKE HER IGNORE DRACO WHEN HE WANTS TO TALK TO HER OR LOOK AT HER. FOR EXAMPLE IF EVERYONE IS TOGETHER LET HER TALK TO EVERY GUY, BUT NOT DRACO. HE SHOULD SUFFER A LOT. IF HIS TRYING TO WIN THE HEART OF THE GIRL HE \"SUPPOSELY LOVES* THEN HE SHOULD STOP SLEEPING AROUND OR BRINGING BIMBOS HOME. HE SHOULD TAKE THEM SOME WHERE ELSE. IT\'S LIKE HE WANTS HERMIONE TO LISTEN TO HIM. FUCKEN PRICK. WISH I COULD KILL RIGHT NOW. LOL. GOOD STORY. NOT MAD AT YA. JUST DRACO. I HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER CONTAINS SOMETHING NEW, EXCITING ABOUT HERMINE\'S NEW LIFE. IF SHE\'S NOT GOING TO BE DRACO\'S PUPPET ANYMORE SHE SHOULD CONSIDER GOING OUT, FLIRT. I LOVE IT WHEN GUYS GET POSSESSIVE. ESPECIALLY, DRACO, BUT HE WENT TO FAR TO CALL HER MUDBLOOD SLUT. WHEN SHE HASN\'T EVEN TOUCHED A GUY, MUCH LESS KISS ONE. UPDATE SOON, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Everything a D/Hr story should be!!!! I\'m anticipating the next chapter already!