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for Subtle Signs

by ShaneCPhillips

person Wolfie
schedule July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is this an alternate to if Tonks hadn't escaped herself from Subtle Warnings when Bellatrix had kidnapped her? Because she seemed to escape herself in that whereas in this she's rescued. Plus she wasn't comatose in that
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There must be a chapter or two missing from the end of "Warning Signs." The first chapter of this sequel jumps right in, and I have no idea what they are talking about, you know? I feel so awful for both Hermione and Tonks--Hermione for the loss of her lover's memories, and Tonks for not remembering anything of herself or the love of her life. The situation is heart breaking, gut-wrenching, bawl my heart out time guaranteed.

Please give us more so that we may see our gals pulling their shit together, and rediscovering themselves and each other, as they were meant to be. It has come to my attention that this story has not been updated since September 2, 2005--NOT good! Total bummer!!!
person AOS
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THATS NOT KOOL..YOU GOTTA UPDATE...IM HOOKED TO THE WHOLE STORY. (on a nicer note)... I love the story. I really wish you would continue.
person OceanAngel
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, you have to continue with it. Don't leave your loyal readers hanging. You would'nt do that to us...Would you?
person Leaf
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hurry up damn it!
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is fantastic! Please update soon, I\'d love to read more!
person Locke Cole
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An all-around good read; of all the insanely implausible coupling fics I\'ve read, this is in the top-five. The story is decent; character development above-par; and the dialogue, for the most part, is good. Unlike most stories of this type rather than spending all my time laughing, you actually managed to spark some interest in me even to the point of looking forward to the next chapter. While the ending seemed a bit forced, I look forward to your completing the next instalment, provided it\'s as well done.
person kaleal
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have an amazing gift in writing, and I lookforward to reading much, much, much more from you in the future. I am quite anxiously awaiting the next chapters...

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person Kateri
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story warning signs was awsome. So this storys bound to be geart it\'s off to a good start.
person maniac musician
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re a brilliant author....Warning Signs definitely had some holes and teeny problems (though it was still amazing), Subtle Signs is far and beyond its predecessor. Your skill with words really shows a lot more so far in this story. keep writing!
sincerely,
Maniac.