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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed reading your writing. i dont normaly review the things i read but for some reason i felt the need to this time. i cant wait to read more. good luck in writing.
-k
-k
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank You! I have found that ever since HBP came out that only a select few people have really tried to write a dramione story that would include spoilers from it. Which is why I would like to say thanks for taking the time to write one. I really like what I\'ve read so far and hope that I can read more soon. I enjoyed the way you had Draco and Harry chat on the trainabout HBP events with no real malice. I also enjoyed the dialogue of Draco, the darling comment and the innuendos, I love a snarky Draco. What I truly love is the fact that you were able to allow for a Draco and Hermione romance without making Ron look bad. So I guess there\'s nothing left to say except-Bring on the Dramione goodness!!!
schedule
August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Start.
Draco would withhold the password from her wouldn\'t he?
Can\'t wait for more.
Draco would withhold the password from her wouldn\'t he?
Can\'t wait for more.
schedule
August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far, so good!!! If you don\'t have beta for your stories, email me, I\'d be happy to lend a helping hand ... er, eye. Whatever. LOL
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great start...it was really interesting and i can\'t wait for the next chapter...you can tell that Draco at least cares for her a little, since he wanted to spy on her and Ron but it seems weird that Hermione would be heart broken over Ron\'s rejection...usually its Ron getting rejected but this is a new way to look at it!
its kinda weird though that there was this horrible war and the war doesn\'t change them or they aren\'t sad for anyone that died...i don\'t know...it just strikes me that this great fight was over and there isn\'t any aftershock or anything....
anyways...can\'t wait for the next chapter!
its kinda weird though that there was this horrible war and the war doesn\'t change them or they aren\'t sad for anyone that died...i don\'t know...it just strikes me that this great fight was over and there isn\'t any aftershock or anything....
anyways...can\'t wait for the next chapter!