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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 10!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aahhh noooooo Dray just cant catch a break eh? harry better get his ass in gear oh and whats this whole not eating thing about? they gonna starve soon
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m thinking Draco is going to panic and Harry is going to think he just took advantage of Draco even though Draco kissed him. Could be wrong. Can\'t believe how narrowminded Hermione is being. Need chapter 9 please!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bella seemed almost human there. Who killed Narcissa and why? I can\'t wait for chapter 8!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story, thus far. i really like how you are personifying Draco\'s feelings towards Harry, and, harry\'s towards Draco. Please continue writing. I give you a five outta five.
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 please! They are sooo in \"like\" with each other and neither are doing anything about it.
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I shall review, so you will continue this lovely peace of writing! Your style is very nice, and I like how you make everyone in character. Also your story doesn\'t move to fast, it takes it\'s time, which is a major plus! I hope to see more from this story! Please, please continue!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just got done with chapter 5 and I like where it\'s going. Please don\'t stop.
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The mixed tenses are annoying. It should either be present tense or past tense, but you use both in the same sentence... Other than that, it seems good.
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh ahhhh yes slytherins always have the last word and that is how it should be cuz gryfindorks are rather slow hehehe. anyway me likie the story please continue on...