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person Slytherin's Sexiest
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think if u made it a little more fun like add some twists and awkward romantic moments between draco and chiara i would like it more.
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person Emmy
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...interesting. Very interesting... Can\'t wait to see how Malfoy\'s going to charm her. Also how she\'s going to tell Snape about their relationship. I\'m just wondering where the Gryffindor part comes in. Update soon.
person Petalsoft
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty good beginning. Nice set up of characters. I hope she doesn\'t give in to Draco too easily. She should really give him a run for his money. Maybe turn the tables on him. But it\'s your story of course.