rate_review Reviews

It's Accio..
Avada Kedavra..
And not tanks..Tonks.. God... Read it through it least onec,,

no -.-

Two words: God-awful. The story had no sense of pacing, no depth or character development, and can only be classified as Harry Potter fanfiction because the characters have names from the books. On top of that, the sex scene was atrocious. This all goes without mentioning the hillarious lack of conventions and grammar. Of course, if your objective was to make people laugh at inept writing, you\'ve succeeded admirably.

-Locke

This story was good but a little rushed, it seems. If you were to expand it and fix up some errors and make it a longer, more in-depth story I think it would have been better. But anyway it was pretty good. Keep up the good work.