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for Couldn\'t you be that someone?

by Siobahn

person Neko Miu
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was cute! Not to mention amusing when Harry was called a \'she\' at one part of the story
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hope you continue!
person fragonknight01
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet and I really enjoyed it. And, on the side note...there was only 500 or so mistakes, not a 1000.
person SyXX
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww...it\'s so cute...
person LadyX
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lots of spelling errors but i tend to read over those. I know what words you meant. Good one-shot. I liked it.
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was so sweet! *is currently drowning in fluff* I absolutely loved it! I love this kinds of stories ^^;
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too wonderful!
person Dan
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Could have done with a \'bit\' of a beta, but nothing really worth worrying over. Just a couple things there that we\'re all guilty of doing. Mostly it\'s good quality in both grammar and spelling. Especially compared to much of what I have read today. Well Done.

I find the topic interesting. Depression. Honestly, from what I know of depression I would not call him a sufferer in this piece. Rather, I found him simply to be upset. But, I suppose it is different for everyone. Certainly a brave topic to approach in a fanfic.

This story is much more of a pg rating then an \'R\'. But it was definately an interesting read. Thank you for sharing it with us all.