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for Venesian Love

by slygriff21

person angel
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what was great i love it now im going to reread it and i cant wait in till you next story in till then later ...for now

angel
person Aradia
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh... this story is very, very fluffy. I like it, it\'s a good diversion. Thank you for it! :-) But please look for a beta-reader for your next story. There are some misstakes, for example your spelling of \"aurors, Blaise,...\"
person angel
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~crys~ im sooooooo happy almost every one is ok and mione is alive yeaaaaaaaaaa to that i cant wait in till next chapter and in till tne keep up the awesome work .. and later for now

angel
person angel
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
here has to be a way to save mione and make sure those two premonitions do not come true... well in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person Barbara
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great update, started out so sad and I was just happy to read that the happy couple made up.
person lydia
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i didn\'t think severus would be that mean to hermione, even if he didn\'t meen it. glad they made up.hopefully part of his last vision will come true and they will win and hermione still lives. can\'t wait til the next post.
person angel
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor snape no wonder he was sooo mad i hope they all can be saved and the dark lord will die .... please keep up the awesome work and later

angel
ps rememder love peace and fan fics
person angel
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh that was sooo sweet i love it and now milli and harry have told each other that they love one other in ti great and sirius and katrina man i cant wait in tinn next in .... keep up the awesome awesom work anf later for now

angel
person Barbara
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Was happy to be able to read another part before work this morning. Keep the chapters coming.
person Barbara
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update. Keep it coming. Loving all the action and romance.