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by Yhu

person Florville
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an awesome chapter! It\'s great to see Lucius\' personality come out in this one, it really gives a good sense of the character. Poor Shawn, though! I shudder to think what he\'s going to have to contend with once Lucius is better.

Florville
person Jessie
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m liking this so far. Love how you combine both characters
person Florville
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great way to begin a story! Very suspensful...poor Lucius! It\'s also interesting to follow his train of thought...can\'t wait to see what happens when he wakes up!