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ahhh, write more! this is wonderful stuff. The only criticism I can think of is that you don\'t have the elegance and wordsmanship of Rowling....but who does, really? You have a really good plot flowing, and the ideas genuinely seem like Rowling thought of them herself! Keep writing! as fast as is humanly possible.

Sweet story thus far, how many times have you read th ebooks to come up with this stuff? I wonder, please do continue on with the stroy and enjoying it.

Two things. One is that the teachers had definitely decided to close the school after the funeral. So they would all have definitely been gone, plus they all probably would have been on summer vacation at that point anyway. Two, is that boys cant go in the girls dormitories. Gj so far, good to see somehbp fiction out so quick!

Plus, i like where your going with the snape thing. Currently, my favorite theory is that, unwillingly, snape did the unbreakable vow, since it would have let voldy know that snape was not on his side anymore, and so snape had no choice but go along with it, and told dumbledore about the vow, and then when draco was trying to carry out the deed, dumbledore begged snape to kill him so that draco wouldnt be made into a murderer, since he knew either draco or snape had to kill him. I was recently reminded of a comment that dumbledore made a couple books ago, something to the effect of \"snape will have to perform the most difficult task of all\". Of course, this could all be rubbish, and snape could just be an asshole. =o)

Ooooo, plus right now, best theory about RAB is regulus a black, sirius\'s bro who betrayed voldy. Sorry, i just like spreading around the theories and seeing what people think. =o)

By the by, they allready explained in HBP the story behind the name half blood prince. Him being half muggle and all, and how his mother\'s family name was Prince, and how his dad was a muggle.

I have read all 4 chapters and can\'t wait for #5! Dove tails excellently with HBP! Keep writing it!

I have been looking for a fic like this. I read the book in five hours and I really want to believe that Snape killed Dumbledore as part of their master plan. Dumbledore knew he was going to die, maybe? Keep writing!

I think you\'ve got the right idea with this fic. I simply can\'t believe that there wasn\'t a reason for what happened. If you\'re in want or need of a beta, I\'ll be available starting the beginning of August.

~K

seems promising so far and i look forward to reading it, but do pop in a spoiler warning , not everyone will have read HPB