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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was definitely powerful - the most powerful you\'ve written. You shoudl be very proud of it! I\'m enjoying the story and am looking forward to wherever it leads.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been a terrible reviewer lately, but this is a really good story - your original characters are good, and I like the focus on the next generation of kids. I\'ve definitely read far enough into it to know that I\'ll keep reading! You\'re a very good writer.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im really likeing this story as ur first reviewer i m asking for u to update regularly to keep me amused lol only kidiin
great story
keep up the good work
great story
keep up the good work