rate_review Reviews

A beautifully written little gem!

I really enjoyed this very much. You write great descriptive scenes that make your work quite believable.Nice job!

Wow... That was a very good story. I think you get applause for that. ^^ *gives ovation* well done, says I.

An intelligent fic with nicely ironic touches.

i loved it. i haven\'t found many good stories of dumbledore and snape, when snape chose to abandon voldy. you did this so well, you shoul post in on ff net, lol cause i dont get on AFF net often and dont have an account

i loved it. i especially loved the chocolate and fudge bits you added in, darkly funny. i haven\'t found many good stories of dumbledore and snape, when snape chose to abandon voldy. you did this so well, you shoul post in on ff net, lol cause i dont get on AFF net often and dont have an account.

Twas very sweet and I loved it.

That was very well written! You have a flair with words and a great style of writing! You envisioned a scene that in its own way is terribly important and did so with empathy and a firm grasp of the characters. Too bad it also showed Dumbledore to be a manipulative b***. Why did he not do anything about the mauraders incident when it happened? Why did he turn up just when Snape was about to end everything and recruit him? Did he know ahead of time that this would happen? Did he secretly plan it?

Your fic shows a turning point in one person\'s life. The reader can either see Dumbledore as a savior or as the instigator. It\'s up to the reader to decide.

Spooky.

Please write more!!!