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for Elementary Magic

by AngelsOdyssey

person Hannah
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job with this piece. Personnally, I\'d like to see it continued, but that\'s just me. I think I\'ll go look and see if you have any other stuff now....
~Hannah >.<
person Lilith
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It has promise-- I think you should continue it. Usually the whole \"Asshole! (pause) *Snogging session*\" thing only works in sitcoms, but it wasn\'t bad here. I also find it strange that Hermione didn\'t know what the light meant. She does, after all, know everything. ;).
person Nina
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story. Please continue it. dont just leave it like that. Its too great. email me if you need any ideas or anything. Great Story.
person Thisbe
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more.... *begs*
person Anon
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yup. add to it...I\'m liking it!
person Susan
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet...needs lemons. LOL. I loved them going toe-to-toe arguing like that. Well done. I hope that you add as second chapter, but it stands well by itself. Thanks so much.
person ozarkmoon
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, continue please!
person Pastel
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please! You can\'t leave it at that. Please update.
person Miari
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Toying with the idea... what do we think....
HELL YES! MORE!
person silverslake
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course you will add to it! And soon! There\'s no question about that!
You can\'t leave us like this!! :)
Hurry up! Write! Update! Pleeease!!! :)