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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good. add to it please!
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this would have been a better story if you hadn't rushed it. You had a decent beginning, but the concept you're working with can't be done in a summary style as you've portrayed it. You need to flesh out the scene for it to work. The plot line could be interesting, but you've cheated it.
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Add!!!!!!!! I need more. I will die a horible death if you don\'t continue this story.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go for a sequel, it has potential.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a wonderful story and please please continue it, ok? It is really good and it deserves to be longer and better.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It would be fabulous if you added to this story!!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon