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May 14, 2019 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent Tonks/Harry story! Hope it continues!
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October 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
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May 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Great story hope to see more very soon
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story. Have you abandond it?
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
vernon got in two hits before tonks did something--and she didn't arrest tubby?
Do all up. Characters have to be total losers?
If she doesn't bury Bumble's head even further up his ass, she is just another mindless Bumble worshipper.
Do all up. Characters have to be total losers?
If she doesn't bury Bumble's head even further up his ass, she is just another mindless Bumble worshipper.
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It would be nice is, when someone wises up to Dumbles, they did more than just talk to him. Lawyers, aurors, articles in newspapers, something, to let the WW know that Dumbles is not "of the Light."
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the premise, but you jump around too much--as though the ideas are coming so fast you can't take the time to flesh them out.
You have Harry seeing Dumbles in the Tonks' house and then you have Harry going to Hogwarts to see Dumbles. You really need to give the story the justice it deserves and straighten out the many confusing sentences.
You have Harry seeing Dumbles in the Tonks' house and then you have Harry going to Hogwarts to see Dumbles. You really need to give the story the justice it deserves and straighten out the many confusing sentences.
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really really good! Quite plausible and everything! :-)
Good work! Really looking forward to more!
Good work! Really looking forward to more!
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hm i like this story =] plzcontinue it =]