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September 2, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Just a really good story.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I like it! This one is by far one of the most intersting stories I\'ve read in a while. Great writing! Keep it up!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. I think an epilogue would definitely tie things up nicely, but as it stands is fine as well. It leaves the reader wondering what happens to all those involved. Well done.
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read both stories. You took a lot more than just the format from Buttercup\'s story.
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... interesting thoughts. Like that it is just Hermione, keeps it simple. I wish I could say this stuff doesn\'t happen, but it does. I like the parallel between the healthy relationship and the unhealthy ones.
Keep writing.
Keep writing.
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write an epilogue! Please please please!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the fast update. Wow. Gully is a fucking bastard. Grrrr...Taking advantage of her. I really like this story. I wonder what Severus is going to do...
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, I feel sorry for Laura who is obviously insecure, but seems very young. From the writing in her diary I would have put her age closer to 13 or 14. I think Hermione needed to cut the umblilical cord before she ran off with the baby. Why are all those people there? Poppy should be throwing out anyone who isn\'t working on Laura or the baby.