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for By Fair Means or Foul

by lojenn

person Anon
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shame on you! Making me read a Severus/Lucius, Shame! Shame! Shame!

*sighs* Next update tomorrow?
person rebecca R
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow excelent start!
HO many chapies will this one have?
person Phorcys
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start, I like the relationship between Snape and Lucius it isn\'t hurrried like a lot of stories. Please keep writting.
person Amaya
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bounces* I love it so far. I have read very little of this pairing but for me reading different pairings makes it more interesting. Man you really have a good grasp of these characters. The dialog between them was so in character it was amazing. I am not sure weather I feel more sorry for Snape with having to put up with Valentine\'s Day or for Valentine\'s Day having to put up with Snape. ^_^! Either way the whole thing had me on my butt laughing and it is only going to get worse. Wow it is just starting and already the sexual tension begins. It is romantic but surrounded by this oar of sexy evilness. I can\'t wait for the guys to start chasing Snape and to see a jealous Lucius. I love seeing the dominate one get jealous. That was so sweet when Lucius said he had wanted a daughter too. =^_^=

Is this going to be a long fic or kind of a short one? How come your status says complete? It scared me for a minute when I got to the end.

Update soon please!!!!
person Amaya
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow you updated fast!!! =^_^= I was just wondering around the site and there it was.

*falls over laughing* I love this chapter!!! It was so funny!!!! Poor Snape but that is what happens when you can\'t control your temper. Everyone seems to be in on his love life. First Hagrid and now McGonagall. She must not like that cousin of her\'s very much to throw an angry Snape at her. Still the thought in itself is hilarious. I am starting to like Trelawney. And just think....it is only breakfast. He still has the whole day ahead of him. hehehehe ^_^ I love it!!!!

YAY I am glad it will be long!!!