schedule
June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first six chapters. This is such a fun story! Usually don\'t read LM/SS, but maybe I need to change my mind! I love Snape being the center of all this amorous attention! He is usually the outcast in a story..And Lucius is such a devious (no surprise there) romantic (there\'s the surprise)! Love the byplay...Thanks for updating so quickly..do you have a magic quill?
schedule
June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is just so great...LMAO!! ^_^ Gods, I love seeing Severus outthinking all his would be admirers!
schedule
June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG Poor Snape!!! The only thing I hate more than public show of affection is corny public show of affection. ^_^! As if the guy is some silly little girl who would giggle and blush for them. Oh well their stupidity is extremely funny. hehehe.
YAY finally Lucius enters again!!! I loved how after ever couple of thoughts his mind would drift back to Snape and the so called keepers. It is so cute seeing him getting jealous!!! ^_^ I hope he runs into a few of those chasing after Snape. *thinks evil thoughts* ^_^! What is this reputation for good sex thing? Is that some type of myth or is it true? What an evil father. @_@
I will try and take a look at that story mentioned. If you based this story on it then it has to be pretty good. ^_^
YAY finally Lucius enters again!!! I loved how after ever couple of thoughts his mind would drift back to Snape and the so called keepers. It is so cute seeing him getting jealous!!! ^_^ I hope he runs into a few of those chasing after Snape. *thinks evil thoughts* ^_^! What is this reputation for good sex thing? Is that some type of myth or is it true? What an evil father. @_@
I will try and take a look at that story mentioned. If you based this story on it then it has to be pretty good. ^_^
schedule
June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So...why is everyone so excited over Sevvy being able to bear kids? Are they especially powerful or is it just because he is so drop dead sexy? Great story!
schedule
June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story at first. But then you seemed to be losing sight of things...later on the the chapters. There should be more Snape Lucius action going on..lol. hey i love smut..doesn\'t everyone. You seem to be channeling Ejab\'s Path of the Serpent...which is a good thing. I love that story and the writer...I\'m still waiting for the next installment of the sequel to that particular story.
hope that helps a little.
hope that helps a little.
schedule
June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls out of chair laughing*
Ohh. i bet Sev loved that! Haa!! LMAO!!
Geeze, i can tell this will be yet another favorite story!
Ohh. i bet Sev loved that! Haa!! LMAO!!
Geeze, i can tell this will be yet another favorite story!
schedule
June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good job.
schedule
June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that is what I call gossiping. ^_^! And here I thought my school was bad. I liked how you wrote chapter three in a set of letters. It is a creative way of telling what a big deal this is. I sooo want a picture of all those owls flying at him. LOL!!! I loved that scene. =^_^= Then all those nosy teachers looking through everything. I am surprised he did not attack and kill McGonagall for reading his letters out loud like that. She is almost like a sister the way she picks on him. Wow I never knew Snape was that greedy to go through and take all the good stuff. I thought he would throw a fit and destroy it all. Evil Albus but I like his style. The chase is on!!! Lucius better get his butt in there fast. *waves a go Lucius sign around*
schedule
June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooo...damn! MORE!
I laughed so hard! You are amazing!
I laughed so hard! You are amazing!
schedule
June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Good! i havent read a SS/LM fic befor and this one so far rocks!
I there is some good sexual happening in the near future*evil grin*
Oh and btw i am a horrible speller so excuse any errors in my reviews!
I there is some good sexual happening in the near future*evil grin*
Oh and btw i am a horrible speller so excuse any errors in my reviews!