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those were great i cant wait in till you update need to know that snape will do to lupin and what els malfoy has done to hermione and how they will save her man this is a great story well in till next time later

angel

I still like this story very much. The only complaint I have is Hermione\'s birthday is September 19th. Aside from that, it is well written, if a bit OOC. Hey, that is not always a bad thing! The Pensieve chapter was very good. It is nice to see how them came together. Am looking forward to reading why Snape stayed away so long. Lucius is a nasty piece of work(well done on him) and Remus is just a dick. I don\'t believe I have ever read a story with Lupin being a bad guy. Nice change!

A change of pace for Lupin to act evil, I was shocked. can\'t wait to read more.

Please update soon .... this story is amazing. Can\'t beleive what Remus said. If he truly loved her he\'d never want to hurt no matter what .... just like Severus does. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Update soon!!!

Love you
Lynette
xxx

Wow! This story just keeps on surprising me, and yet remains so good! This new twist with Remus is so intense I can barely handle myself!

no way... no way.. he cant .... he is sooooooooooooooo mean .... i cant wait in till you update next.. i need to know what will happen next ....well thank you and later

angel

You evil, evil, evil perosn for stopping the story right there. Damn!?! I was really getting into it with the crying and the laughing, I really was. I do hope that you continue one with this story. I can proudly say that I am very glad you found a beta to help you with everything and to help make this story better. My hope is that you will keep writing this emotional plot.
I have noticed throughout this story, that Severus is very. . .OOC or Bi-Polar. One minute he is teasing and being very endearing, the next he is sneering and being rude. I find it alittle odd at times.
I would very much like to see flahbacks of Hermione and Severus\' relationship. Nothing like a blast from the past.
I truly hope that you continue on with this enticing plot because you are a very talented writer. I hope to see updates very, very, very soon!?!

Faithful Reader,
-frichen

omg i love it!! you better write more or im gonna be really angry lol. :-) love it love it love it keep on can\'t wait for next chapter

Damned revision! lol I\'m really getting into this! Keep up the good work. Any chance you can let me know when you update? Good luck with the revision and good luck with the rest of the story!

i cant wait .... the is getting good i look for to seeing you next update soooo thank you for the quick update i hope they keep coming quick i just love this story...well later

angel