rate_review Reviews

Nice and long. Very well written and i love if from a first person POV. You Did Well.

.....*cries*......that was fucking awesome!.............^^ i love this story, it has depth- its not just a bunch of sex and a loose plot that doesn\'t even really go with anything.........thank you for writing this- i know that i will now have only sweet (delicious, actually) dreams when i go to bed in a second^^........*hugs*.....Ja ne!

i liked it a lot. although the tension between them was sort of annoying at first.

Absolutly wonderful. The building of tension was perferct, making it even more erotic. Great job.

BUT HE DIES!!!!! *whimpers in sadness* Sure they are together now~but he dies!!!! ah...i hate that he dies and leaves remus alone! Bastard! But this story is very good. I love remus and the only one i can pair him off with and feel okay about it is Sirius! I love how they were together in school as a secret. I can so understand James fury if he ever found out about the invisability cloak....heads would roll..aLL of them! I love it, i wish you would have told a little more about the past. But it was soo good regardless.

Mmm, that was awesome. I think I need a cigarette after that ... and I don\'t smoke!
I love the little touches you add, the things we\'d recognize from the movies and books, like when Sirius places Remus\'s hand on his heart. Those parts make me smile.
And then, of course, there\'s the sex. I don\'t have to tell you how much I love that.

Excellent interpretation. That was a potentially vague comment.
I like the story! It had just enough plot and talk to balance the sex and such.