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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How can you be so mean...are you really going to take their angel away? I know you are going to give them another girl but this is just horrible!
schedule
May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story for the family ties that you\'re developing. One of those feel-good family things.
Even after 18 years, Harry and Severus still roll around like \'teenagers\' in their love making, I just love it! Some more descriptions should be included to spice it up, though.
Wow, juggling a large family, teaching and being Deputy Headmaster, Severus has his hands full. Great idea that you gave Hermoine for the 6-10 year olds. Will this also include children from muggle families or those who don\'t really know that they are magical?
Your writing is good, just a few grammatical errors, but still very much readable. The story line moves well, and although I\'d like a slightly slower pace, this is o.k. too.
Feeding your muse chocolate, sugar quills, fizzing wizzbees and Droobles Best Blowing Gum to make her write and dream up more snarry stuff.
Please, update soon. I really want to know what happens next.
Even after 18 years, Harry and Severus still roll around like \'teenagers\' in their love making, I just love it! Some more descriptions should be included to spice it up, though.
Wow, juggling a large family, teaching and being Deputy Headmaster, Severus has his hands full. Great idea that you gave Hermoine for the 6-10 year olds. Will this also include children from muggle families or those who don\'t really know that they are magical?
Your writing is good, just a few grammatical errors, but still very much readable. The story line moves well, and although I\'d like a slightly slower pace, this is o.k. too.
Feeding your muse chocolate, sugar quills, fizzing wizzbees and Droobles Best Blowing Gum to make her write and dream up more snarry stuff.
Please, update soon. I really want to know what happens next.