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Your story was nice, it would have been more interesting if it was longer and more in depth though. Also, it would be good to know what happened to the girl.

You mentioned in the previous chapter that Albus retired three years ago, then you had him sitting at the Head Table for the ball. This needs an explanation because as it stands it looks like a plot error. I did this once, killed off three people and then had them ushering people into the castle three chapters later. Easily done, especially if you are writing more than one fic. Just thought I's mention it.

two things. one: harry and snape\'s \"angel\" is a icky mary sue. two: okay do you like when you\'re parents make out in front of you??? why would harry\'s kids like it? sure they were like get a room, but who says \"that would be hot if you weren\'t my parents\"??? ewe. oh and there was a typo with \'hot\'.

I liked this alot. As a parent, it really hit me when I read of parents dealing with the helplessness of going through a child\'s illness. Brought a tear to my eye and I had to go look in on both of my daughters and sneak a hug while they slept.

Very sweet.

V.good I thought it was SOO sweet the way william had shaved his hair off!

*Eowyns elixure

Thanks for a lovely ending. Hopefully Sarah-Beth\'s treatment are successful and her and William get married, being first loves. Ahhh...*sighs*

Congratulations on making it out of school, you know the learning never ends.....

Now, go finish all those other fics you started and I bookmarked so I can read them

You\'re right, the song went well with how you wrote it.

Thank you.

That was very well done, usually I don\'t like song fics because either a: the song doesn\'t fit the story, or b: the song interrupts the flow of the story so much that you can\'t enjoy the story itself. Once again well done.

Thanx for not killing off anyone! I think Williamina is perfect

I don\'t normally read sad fics but what I read so far is good
I can\'t wait for the next chapter.I hope it will be posted soon.

I just love the stories where Sev and Harry are happy with a house full of children.