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You know harry could just find a snake and ask it where the nearest cave is, and perhaps any other important info, i always like it when harry uses parseltongue

I\'m loving this so far. I wish that you would update more often.

So, Alright alright, here are some answers to you

Actually, you do state that they have been there for 27 days - close enough to a month for me. In the first line of chapter three, Severus states that he believes it is November 1, and he has already been there for two weeks with Potter. Then after the break in the page, it is stated that it is November 13th. I did find your titles to the books in the library amusing. An interesting mix of kiddie books and Dark Arts manuals. Somehow fitting that Harry would come across the Dark Arts books while Severus finds the kiddie books.

Ok, I\'m officially confused. Here is a list of questions:

1. Why didn\'t Sev and Harry do a quick march around around as much of the territory as they could once they realized the town was empty?

2. Why did they not stay in the town and fix up one of the shelters for winter if it is coming?

3. Why did they return to camp Albus when they knew that it would be counter-productive?

4. Why are they building a shelter out at the camp when they could be searching for the people who built the town?

Arwen Rayne

Why on earth would two reasonably intelligent people spend a month sitting around in the woods rather than looking for others? And why go back to a primitive campsite when you\'ve found a perfectly habitable town with intact buildings when winter is coming? They both seem completely moronic. The premise that they are alone, without magic, would be interesting, but wouldn\'t they at least try to find out what the hell is going on in the world?

hey!

I love your story! it\'s something totally
different and the changing povs are also a good idea!
go on like this!

So, if they are going back to the deserted village, why don\'t they stay in that shelter (the library), instead of building their own??? You don\'t say that Severus enjoys living this way, in fact, he wants to get back to his old life. Can you please explain this??? Maybe the library smelled bad or they were afraid that whatever destroyed the village would come back again......?????

Wooo Hooo! Sex talk, alright, now we\'re getting somewhere. Just enough to tease us though.....ARGGHHH!

So what kind of books will Severus bring back? Will they share body heat because it\'s getting colder? Will Harry learn to make a parka from bunny rabbits?

O.K., so please write more stuff on this story.....I really like the way you\'ve weaved Harry\'s and Severus\' POV. It really balances (tips the balance?) of the story.

Hurry.

Ooh I love the whole Harry POV and Snape POV thing, makes stuff more interesting.

LOVE it! Keep it up - Jessica

I don\'t know why they didn\'t stay in the deserted village. There had to be more raw materials there than in the woods.

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