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October 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Tes
YAY! So glad I found this story again. I was worried it was taken down. I wish you'd continue it, but if not, that's fine. It is still awesome. Loved the original idea.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
goddame it the story is fine but let them fuck!!!!!!!!!
ps love the whole steve erwin /fate thing
ps love the whole steve erwin /fate thing
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it I can't wait for more.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI! This is your beta "from the past". Please e-mail me ASAP so I can help you. kirsten56@lycos.com
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! My e-mail address is above. Contact me ASAP so I can help you!
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes! Your continuing with this! I am sooooo happy, i think this story is hilarious! I loved the threats...mcgonagalls tampon...nothing is worth that...
Is the chairman Snape? \'Cause it sounded the Ravenclaw hit someone\'s groin, so I would assume that someone would be a man.... any suggestions..ummm, that anyone except Ginny gets harry. Me no likey Ginny. *boos HBP Harry/Ginny relationship*
Someone plans a detention with Harry and then knocks out the teacher?
Trail of jellybeans?
Someone purposefully has Harry injure them during quidditch or dueling practice so that he would help them or stay by their bedside \'all night long\'?
Someone engorgio\'s certainparts of themselves in order to gain Harry\'s attention?
Someone becomes an unregistered animagus and becomes Harry\'s new pet (does this in secret and doesn\'t tell the G.S.S so that he/she can have many weeks to study Harry.)
Don\'t have to use them...can\'t wait fo rthe next update..and remember have fun writing!
-XM
Is the chairman Snape? \'Cause it sounded the Ravenclaw hit someone\'s groin, so I would assume that someone would be a man.... any suggestions..ummm, that anyone except Ginny gets harry. Me no likey Ginny. *boos HBP Harry/Ginny relationship*
Someone plans a detention with Harry and then knocks out the teacher?
Trail of jellybeans?
Someone purposefully has Harry injure them during quidditch or dueling practice so that he would help them or stay by their bedside \'all night long\'?
Someone engorgio\'s certainparts of themselves in order to gain Harry\'s attention?
Someone becomes an unregistered animagus and becomes Harry\'s new pet (does this in secret and doesn\'t tell the G.S.S so that he/she can have many weeks to study Harry.)
Don\'t have to use them...can\'t wait fo rthe next update..and remember have fun writing!
-XM
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS has been ABSOLUT Hilariouosness ... Please PrettyPlease with Naked sexy people on top?
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY GOOD!! There are still some typos, though. If you would like me to continue beta-ing this story (and make more corrections on what is here) e-mail me ASAP!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the story very much. I hope you will continue it.
Now for some practical writing remarks. I think you need a second beta. There are still spelling and punctuation errors showing up. I know it\'s hard to get them all, but I think you can do better. I try to get two on my own stories, as one often catches something the other misses. I would be willing to do it on this story, if a 2-3 day turn around time is good for you. Shoot me an e-mail if you\'d like for me to have a go at it.
Also, what word processing program are you composing in? It\'s really messing up your line breaks, making the story more difficult to read. Some readers are really put off by this kind of thing (as well as spelling/punctuation problems) and you don\'t want people avoiding your story for that reason. Please understand this isn\'t meant in a mean way, but just pointing out some problems.
Hoping for more, soon. :-)
Now for some practical writing remarks. I think you need a second beta. There are still spelling and punctuation errors showing up. I know it\'s hard to get them all, but I think you can do better. I try to get two on my own stories, as one often catches something the other misses. I would be willing to do it on this story, if a 2-3 day turn around time is good for you. Shoot me an e-mail if you\'d like for me to have a go at it.
Also, what word processing program are you composing in? It\'s really messing up your line breaks, making the story more difficult to read. Some readers are really put off by this kind of thing (as well as spelling/punctuation problems) and you don\'t want people avoiding your story for that reason. Please understand this isn\'t meant in a mean way, but just pointing out some problems.
Hoping for more, soon. :-)
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleez write more and email me when you post the next chapter! i love this one, funny, sexy, smart and interseting its perfect!