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for My Immortal

by FaeChild

person LPhoenix
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*weeps with sev*
person Arwen Rayne
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: It is quite good. The emotional intensity was well developed. Good job!
person Hambares
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh this is heartwrenching. Poor Severus.
person fragonknight01
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I should like to read a chapter 2 if you could post it, please?
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh i like this so far. I cant wait to see what happens, i wonder where he is. Gosh theres so many possibilities. Please update soon

Great Start - Jessica
person sutekhsnape
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say you\'ve intrigued me. I\'m in the process of procrastinating (can\'t think of a thing to write at the moment) and I stumbled upon this, and I\'m glad I did. Keep it up...

SutekhSnape
person antipyro
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, really good start. It\'s all angsty already. So many questions as to why Harry just left and why he can\'t be found.

I hope Severus finds him before running out of resources. I can\'t imagine a Severus who isn\'t independent or dependent on keeping his job, which he hates? in this story??? Nope, wouldn\'t work for me, not unless something else happens, like winning the Wizarding Lottery, lol.

Keeping updating and post soon.