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for Satan\'s Apple

by LaverneDeMontmorency

person Anon
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person PlaidPooka
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your chapters are exceedingly short, you may want to consider uploading several on each update. I\'ve seen other writers do that. Hermione seems OOC, I\'ll look forward to reading how you make it believable for her to use an unforgivable on her own child for such a minor thing.
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello :-)
Well I read alot of HG/SS fics. Here and on other sites. Mostly the fics are incomplete and I find myself getting them all confussed. However I do not think I will be getting this one confussed with any others.
Very unique and interesting!! I am looking foward to seeing where this story goes!!

TaintedAngel xxx
person Miari
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT??? Oh that was EVIL! Just enough to raise my \"WTF?!\" alarm. BLAST! Now I GOTTA read it to see what in the world happened that would make Hermione raise her child to become such a creature, to see what caused Hermione and Severus to snap and bring them to such an apparent detestation of Dumbledore and Harry, and (the part I know I\'ll enjoy [well, hopefully]) how Hermione and Severus got together in the first place.
cruel cruel cruel author