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for Teddy Bear

by lonewerewolf

person Shaddow
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GODAMNIT, YOUR CHAPTERS NEED TO BE LONGER!!!!!!!!! UNTIL THEY DO, NO DECENT REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!
person Hambares
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My kingdom for a longer chapter! I am looking forward to the next update. Hurry Severus!
person antipyro
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Severus gets there in time.....This is getting really tense.

Cute Veela trick, following scents of your mate...

Please post soon.
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol LOVE this chapter! \' And stared ... And stared \' lol. Cant wait to see more

Wow, gods 3 am already, *yawns* Loads of chocolate frogs for you and your muse

Loved it Wolfie! - Jessica
person antipyro
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? Why so short???? Please, Please make it longer.... Aw, come on.....


O.k., then post more often, Humpf!

thank you.......
person Kaitlin
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man that was painfully short this time, I want more please! i want to know what they have to say, I want to see remus and harry rescued...please update soon...the suspense is killer!
person Shaddow
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please do us all a favor and stop posting these damn teasers and post a normal fucking chapter. And please have somebody tell Sirius that he sounded like Sev the only time he opened his mouth, and that if he plans to hate somebody, picking up their speech patterns is defiantly not the way to go.
person berkely
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story!! keep up the great writing and please update soon!! :)
person Raven Potter-Snape
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absulootly love this!!! Please update soon and when you do e-mail me!
person Brin
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters? What chapters? Need more chapters ... Longer, fuller chapters ... more ... need more ...
Like it a lot but chapters are way to short. In other words, more. Please.