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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you for cutting it off like that. And you\'re trying to drive me up the wall with your paragraph style aren\'t you? And just how did Harry kill Voldemort, you never mentioned. Also, I;m curious as to what HArry will do.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep the chapters coming. This is interesting.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. WIll you be updating soon? Cause I just can\'t wait!!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter . is harry a werewolf? why was remus in pain when he had harry blood in his mouth
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great addition to the story.
Hmmm, Veela blood doesn\'t let you inherit the Werewolf properties??? Interesting!!!! Could this be a for sure cure or treatment????
Please, continue to write and post often, pretty please????
Hmmm, Veela blood doesn\'t let you inherit the Werewolf properties??? Interesting!!!! Could this be a for sure cure or treatment????
Please, continue to write and post often, pretty please????
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good. Hope Hemlock doesn\'t cause too much of a problem. Looking forward to reading more. Want romance. Some Harry/Sev soon please?
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your style for this one is short and to the point. It\'s like quick flashes of what\'s happening. I like it because the action is very fast paced and things change quickly. Then again, more description to fill out details would paint a clearer picture for your scenes and make the story flow better and more interesting. To use description effectively though, takes practice. You have an interesting idea for this story and the short, punchy text is still a good read. Like everything else you write, I look forward to reading this one too!
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay Sevvie Saved Harry!! Woohoo, lol ooh More More.
Love it so much! - Jessica
Love it so much! - Jessica
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i din\'t get it. Oh, and I am still nagging at you to WRITE LONGER CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!! >.< Just so you know [sweet smile]
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damnit such a good story and u go and irritate me by doin repeated cliffhangers down to your latest chapter... the least you could do is update soon please I would love to know how snape rescues harry!